Things escalate at a snail’s pace in this story. Just when
the storyline seems to be picking up speed, the narrator slows down by giving
us (unnecessary) in-depth descriptions of
characters and settings.
One example of this distraction (as I will now refer to it),
comes on page 6. Instead of simply stating the maiden’s beauty, we are flooded
with details of Nature’s efforts to create such an attractive human being.
Plenty of people would kill to be told that “never before had such a lovely
creature been seen on the face of the earth” (6). I am impressed by the way
that the narrator is able to speak so much and so intensely about the beauty of
this maiden, yet, I still do not have a clear idea of what she looks like
(except, of course, her hair is even brighter than the women in Pantene
commercials).
What confused me about this maiden’s description, was the
end. The narrator focuses solely on the maiden and Nature’s painstaking
efforts, but the last sentence of this description focuses on males instead. It
seemed odd to me that the narrator praised this maiden’s beauty and wisdom,
then decides to compare her to a “mirror” for men to see their beauty in.
Another distraction appears on page 21, when we are told
about Enide’s new cloak. It isn’t simply a nice cloak, it is made of
“deep-green silk,” and, “embroidered with little crosses that had been made
especially for her.” I think we can all share the jealousy of her wardrobe
here.
Enide, to me, is a very important part of this story. It
frustrates me that she is praised mainly for her beauty, and less so for her
intelligence, but I am impressed that her knowledge is even mentioned within
this text. In fact, there were a lot of differences in this text from the texts
we have previously read.
One example comes on page fourteen. Erec states his disgust
for violence toward women when he says, “It is disgraceful to strike a woman.”
This would be a foreign concept to the writer of “Courtly
Love.” We’ve moved quickly from a reading which supports beating wives if they
don’t agree with their husbands, to a text that claims the act of hitting women
should never be acceptable. It’s crazy how drastically opinions can change over
time. In a few years, I’m sure we will be looking back on the standards and
beliefs of our society, wondering what the heck we were thinking.
Toward the end of the reading, I found that things picked up
the pace—rather quickly. One small morning conversation between the couple, and
all hell breaks loose. I didn’t expect Erec to act the way he does, and even
less so the way he begins to treat Enide. I can’t help but to believe that he
is testing her…but for what? She is obviously faithful and fully invested in
their relationship. On the other hand, he could be trying to prove his worth as
a knight to her. But I wish he would just give up the dramatic act and go home,
because I can’t see this ending well.